not in praise of artificial
inspired by “Good Things” by angieinspired
everything that’s natural is good
of course, that’s not true
tell it to a hurricane
a mindless celebration of water
and force that would as indifferently
snuff out the candle of your life
as it might look at you
which it won’t, because
it does not care, it can’t
it’s only being
natural
November 22, 2015 at 11:49 pm
What a great anti-ode to a hurricane, a natural disaster. “Tell it to a hurricane” is a GREAT line! Thanks for sharing and the mention.
November 23, 2015 at 12:47 am
You’re welcome and thank you. I appreciate your specific response and your being okay with the tribute. If you didn’t care for the poem, I wouldn’t want you to think a bad poem was your fault. So yay.