My Try
(exercise for ears and eyes)
Like a dog
Keep a blog
Keep the faith
Like a wraith
Like the sun
When it’s done
With a nod
Turn to God
Need help
Like a yelp
Break hate
Like a plate
To the guv’
Give love
Be tired
When we’re mired
When we’re bent
Like a scent
Holy dent
Let’s repent
As we meant
And relent
clcouch123 
September 22, 2016 at 10:39 pm
Amen
September 23, 2016 at 1:45 am
Thank you!
September 23, 2016 at 6:51 am
oh wow! I would like to print this one and paste it on the edge of my desktop and bed too! this is a very powerful prayer/chant brother!
September 24, 2016 at 5:50 pm
Thank you! It was fun to write, though when into it I found myself becoming very careful. Your response is balm, sister.
September 26, 2016 at 1:22 am
Oh. This flows flawlessly to me. The beat and the cascade, perfect. 😉
You’re welcome, brother