The Big Quiet
Was everything else
Set here first
Slathered on by gravity
By passes and twirls
Of heat and carbon
Round an axis circling a
Toddler sun
Looking for a place to stay
Bending away
From solar majesty
The attendance who wants
Some sovereignty if
Only in degrees
Something presses in the middle
Like clay inside a fist
And round and round
Flow minerals
Red and black turns of
Earth that
Slip-slide curved, over and
Under
Until there is a kind of magnetism
From constitution
Settling, not settling
And over which
Into
Water arrives
And after managing an arrangement
Between the land and sea,
It’s time for seething
Into untoward life
Tomorrow there’s be more
For now, it’s just a cell or two
That impulses into
The world
And now will rest to take a breath
Throughout the darkness spell
For now it is decreed
A night and day
C L Couch
primordial soup – daily doodle 046
March 29, 2018
by Don Whitaker
August 24, 2018 at 4:36 am
Your photo and description of earths creation is wonderful and visually stunn8ng. I can imagine it as I read your words. I love the end, the finality of the swirls becoming ordered, no longer chaotic: night and day.