God’s Eyes Were Watching Them
In a good way
God doesn’t care
You did it, so what
You thought this destructive thing
And then another
No big deal
Outside the gate
You did what?
God knows,
Has seen it, will only tally it
If you want it that way
But has other
Things more pressing
And other parts of people
To see without
Unseeing
It’s not carte blanche
For crime
Or open book on wrong
Sin is still sin
And justice hasn’t changed
But there is forgiveness
Repentance—turning ‘round
There is an asking
With a statement of
Belief
With or without articulation
Captain Stormfield came to God
Then died
Was drowned right after
The revival
We could meet him there
If he weren’t
A fictional exemplar
The real is the real
And pointers of all kinds
The hurt we cause
Means something
There is a code
With punishment
But leave it to the one
Who does each perfectly
Change the heart
Not like a bed
And enter heaven
Like a morning, after
We might be surprised to find
Blank pages in the book
Not because what matters
Doesn’t matter
But in the times
That eschatology tries
Explaining,
We might be surprised to find
What is remembered,
What is
Just as good as let go
C L Couch
Their Eyes Were Watching God, a novel by Zora Neale Hurston
“Captain Stormfield’s Visit to Heaven,” a short story by Mark Twain
Photo by Wengang Zhai on Unsplash
May 29, 2020 at 4:49 pm
This so much echoes my prayers, these past months, reminding me that this is true for me, and so for everybody. Prayers broaden and in the process transform.
May 29, 2020 at 5:29 pm
Thank you! Prayers certainly are potent!
May 30, 2020 at 5:12 pm
So eloquent as always, Christopher. A belief in God, leading to a moral code that makes us pause before striking out at others is always a good foundation. As you say in your opening line, God doesn’t care, and I also believe that. But we should care for humanities sake.
May 30, 2020 at 8:21 pm
I’m grateful for your reading, Len. Yes, the call is on us to care for each other, miracles notwithstanding. And I don’t we think we can live writing off concerns with the notion that a miracle will take care of it.