Ordinary Invitation
A pale day
Painted in yellow
Talking to the trees and sky
Green and blue in perfect tones
Framed through the window
Because the house is old,
Tall and wide
In this moment, there is fortune
Lucky to be here
You’re invited—look at that,
You’re here
C L Couch
July 29, 2020 at 7:50 pm
You paint a lovely picture, not gaudy, just clear and clean. the kind of place I would like.
July 30, 2020 at 12:57 am
Thank you! It’s something that a word can suggest so much more. I read your words this way.
July 30, 2020 at 12:06 pm
Yes, it all revolves around the particular, un-gaudy shade of yellow you seem to imply.
July 30, 2020 at 8:32 am
Quite tranquil. Lovely imagery
July 30, 2020 at 8:53 pm
Thank you! I’m happy you enjoy the work this way.
July 30, 2020 at 4:15 pm
Always a pleasure to visit with you and your melodic verse, Christopher.
July 30, 2020 at 8:54 pm
Len, thank you. I’m enjoying your creative posts as well.